2016/1

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agree or disagree; number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.

       I agree with the idea that  number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future. I have two reasons to support my oppinion.

       Firstly, it is not necceary that young people who live with their parents pay cost of living.  Some people say that young people do not have enough money to enjoy their lives. Although much money is supplied, their wages are so low.  Living with their parents enable them to save a large amount of money so that it is 

       Moreover, living with someone allow us to keep their safety. For eaxmple, there is growing tendency for young women living alone to be involved crimes. It is good opportunity that parents can protect young people from a variety of theatens.

      In conclusion, more and more young people who finished their education will live with their parents in the future.

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